I've been very bad about updating this website. It's honestly a great tool that I should be taking advantage of more often. Especially with the new editors they're using now.Now that we're in a month with 31 days again, thus fulfilling the prophecies of my forebears, I'll be taking another crack at my long in limbo novel. This will be re-write number six. Lucky number six.
To get a good kick in the butt, I figured I'd post it up for critique, if anyone is interested in tackling it, feel free. It's just a quick seven page introduction. They say the first five pages of anything make or break whether the reader will keep going. I'm trying to take on a sort of anti-Harry Potter vibe with a relatively angry, bitter main character.
Click below for Chapter 1:
http://imposter.weebly.com/6/post/2012/08/chapter-1-welcome-to-paradise1.html
To get a good kick in the butt, I figured I'd post it up for critique, if anyone is interested in tackling it, feel free. It's just a quick seven page introduction. They say the first five pages of anything make or break whether the reader will keep going. I'm trying to take on a sort of anti-Harry Potter vibe with a relatively angry, bitter main character.
Click below for Chapter 1:
http://imposter.weebly.com/6/post/2012/08/chapter-1-welcome-to-paradise1.html